Saturday, 6 September 2014

PEER FEEDBACK



Hi Alison
Your blog looks well set out. I can fully relate to that sense of guilt you have portrayed in the first paragraph re ‘doing more’ as a teacher.  I think all teachers feel that and should not have to.  I also agree that Inquiry Learning as a pedagogy and other pedagogies can be overwhelming when it can and should be simple.  I think that some bureaucrats are guilty of complicating things to achieve their own agendas that have nothing to do with us at the coal face.
One thing I noticed was that you had quoted Kuhlthau quite often and just before your three questions, had almost back to back quotes.  I didn’t know if it was an overuse or not.  Perhaps have another read and see what I mean.  Well done and good luck with your studies.




Hello Karly   
I think your Annotated Bibliography is well set out and very easy to read and gives a well rounded summary of each source.  You have written a lot which worries me as I don’t know that I will be able to do that with all of mine.
One piece of feedback is that I found some of the links did not work so you may need to go back and address that.  Otherwise, well done.




Hello Cindy
You have set our your A+ Education search journey in a linear and easy to follow model.  This makes the reader feel comfortable especially when you admit to being uncomfortable and in unknown waters.  Your search made sense to me and also made me feel that it was okay not to feel happy with a search engine or the results you achieved.  One improvement may be to try and make the screenshots a little clearer and easier to read but I liked not having an overcrowded page that gave me relevant and to the point information.  Well done.


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